My students seem to be having fun with the repetition in order to emphasize their crazy thoughts. Here's what I wrote with them...
Walk away from all the pain
Before it lingers long enough to stain.
For the love you feel is just one-sided;
Don’t wait anymore, she’s undecided
Why watch her feign?
Her doubt causes your passion to wane
Yet you force yourself to remain
Though in her heart you won’t reside
Walk away
Step outside into the falling rain
To cleanse yourself of her reign;
You don’t deserve to be blindsided.
With every step, the hurt has subsided
you have but yourself to regain
Walk away…
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